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I'M STILL ALIVE!!!!! \(*A*)/
and now that we have established that my title is unique and totally original Congratulations For her prize she requested a picture with herself and a girl from one of my previous drawings who has lost 28 lbs since March 2009,"hazzah to you!!" \(^0^)/-->[link] Those Krabby Patties weren't doing her justice...... Since i have drawn this girl more than once that officially makes her my..... very own OC!!!1111!!1one *cheers* What should i name her? 8D *please comment* *A* BLARG!!!! idk what to say...........OTL Commission me!: [link] *girl who has yet to be named yet* (c) Neopink (me) Comments
YAY! first comment!!! (thanks!)
what do you think i should name her? *A* -- I'm a legit addict of: Thanks so so much!
I love it! You even drew the necklace I was wearing in the photo She actually looks a bit like me And the background is amazing too I'm so glad I caught your kiriban Oh! And congratulations on your OC -- Life is like photography, we use the negatives to develop ♥ This is so beautiful! They are so pretty. I love the rich colours and detail. Nice work.
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glad you like it! 8D any ideas on what should i name her? :'D -- I'm a legit addict of: Is nice, the proportion of the mermaids, also nice background, but it could look better, using fish skin in the tails and underwater effect. I like the colors, so disney princess...
-- Komm, Süsser Tod... CHECK MY GALLERY!!! ^^: [link] gf? does that stand for girlfriend?
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Critiques
Originality: 4 stars - Despite the fact that mermaids are a fairly common thing to draw, the way you have presented it is very nice and original.
Technique: 4 stars - The overall look is very lovely and cute. ^_^
Impact: 3 1/2 stars - Mermaids swimming may not be the most controversial or earth-shattering thing, but the way you have done it is very pleasing to the eye and stands out. It stays in your head for a while, that's for sure. ^_^
My only complaints with this image is the stiffness of the arms and the lineart. Making your lineart a little thicker or darker would help make it look more defined. A trick I like to use with my lineart is to duplicate the lineart layer and then blur the duplicate. It makes it look soft but still defined. As for the stiffness of the arms, maybe try using a reference from a photo or another artwork. Try studying anatomy a bit more. Other than that, this is a BEAUTIFUL image! Great job!
Hope I helped a bit.
~Naia
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